Good work on this assignment. You did a good job of staying calm, cool, and collective and speaking slowly. As we learned in class, it is import to talk slow. Less is more.
As far as the actual content of your elevator pitch, I would recommend not saying that you have the "potential" solution. Instead, I would state it as fact that you have the solution or the answer to this unmet need. This shows confidence and is more likely to convince your audience that your solution truly is the best solution out there.
I also had a hard time getting my video to the 90 second mark. I think that the both of us can definitely use a little bit of work on hitting that target time.
I think your elevator pitch was really good. The way you were able to keep calm during the pitch really provides the viewer with a pleasurable listening experience.
A few things I would say to work on is using less of your hands and shifting of your stance from side to side. I learned that from a public speaking class I took two semesters ago and it really helped me with presenting for classes afterward.
Prince, Your elevator pitch is pretty good. I think maybe you can describe more details about how will you help student to save money. Since the requirement is around 90 seconds. You could probably add more things to fulfill your pitch. Good Luck.
Prince,
ReplyDeleteGood work on this assignment. You did a good job of staying calm, cool, and collective and speaking slowly. As we learned in class, it is import to talk slow. Less is more.
As far as the actual content of your elevator pitch, I would recommend not saying that you have the "potential" solution. Instead, I would state it as fact that you have the solution or the answer to this unmet need. This shows confidence and is more likely to convince your audience that your solution truly is the best solution out there.
I also had a hard time getting my video to the 90 second mark. I think that the both of us can definitely use a little bit of work on hitting that target time.
Good work!
Prince,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch was really good. The way you were able to keep calm during the pitch really provides the viewer with a pleasurable listening experience.
A few things I would say to work on is using less of your hands and shifting of your stance from side to side. I learned that from a public speaking class I took two semesters ago and it really helped me with presenting for classes afterward.
Prince,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch is pretty good. I think maybe you can describe more details about how will you help student to save money. Since the requirement is around 90 seconds. You could probably add more things to fulfill your pitch.
Good Luck.